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Post by Chronos on Oct 3, 2007 16:10:41 GMT -5
well, the fan fic, duh! jk lol
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Post by Chronos on Oct 3, 2007 16:11:29 GMT -5
next part, commin at cha! ;D
Training was hard. Itasuske did learn that the more you sweat in training, the less you bleed in battle, but this was ridiculous. It was Saturday for goodness’ sake! Why, oh why had he paired up with this women? Did she have no merciful bones in her body? He was considering all of these thoughts as he was forced by Nakita to do 300 thumb push-ups while trying to balance two 100 pound rocks on each foot. Why, oh why had he agreed to her training? He thought she was just joking and creating a excuse for them to be together! “271...272...273...274” “Faster, or else you will have horrible reaction time.” Nakita was enjoying this, he thought to himself. She must have some perverse pleasure in seeing pain in others. Why else would he be forced to do this? “289...290...291...292” He could feel the stones loosing balance because his legs shook so much. “If you can’t do this, it is 4 laps around the track” Even though that didn’t seem like much, in the condition he was in, he probably couldn’t do one. “297...298...299...300!” He stopped, carefully dropped his legs so that the stones would still be in balance, took off the stones and carefully placed them on the ground. “Ok, time for a break” Nakita said. Finally, he thought. After all this morning, starting at 4:00 am, now it was noon. While he dragged himself over to the waterfall, Nakita calmly took out her lunch that they had bought at the store before they left. She had a sandwich, a bottle of lemonade, and a bag of Doritos (yay for references to the rp). That seemed like a feast to Itasuske, who was only allowed a few celery sticks and a small glass of water. “Why do you get all of that?” Itasuske said. “Do I hear complaining?” Nakita asked rhetorically. “No” He said quickly. He had learned that if one complained during Nakita’s Death Training, as he had come to call it in his head, training was doubled. He did not want that. “And don’t call my special training anything but training, thank you.” Nakita added. He kept his thoughts blank after that.
“I think that is enough for today” Nakita said after they finished their lunches. “Whatever you say.” Itasuske was silently thanking whatever pinhead god inspired her to take a break today. She looked at the waterfall, “Did you know that a waterfall provides purification to the entire body of water that it supplies?” Itasuske looked at her strangely. “Did you just make that up?” She grinned, “Yeah, but does it really matter?” She looked at him. He looked back, “Perhaps not, but you had me going for a second.” She laughed, she was still the only one she had heard laugh when he was around. It was a good feeling when he could say something that would make a person laugh. She got in closer, and leaned her head on his shoulder. “What do you think you are going to do with your life?” She asked. “Stay wherever you are, protect you when you need it, and hopefully scrape by a living while I am at it.” “Sounds like a plan to me.” She leaned in for a kiss, but it seems that the pinhead gods had a different plan for the young couple.
Without warning, a kunai flew right in between the two. Itasuske looked first. There Kabuto was, again messing in things that were not his business. “What do you want, you perv?” Itasuske said, “Didn’t get your ass kicked hard enough last time?” “I am here to send a message from my master, who is on his way,” He said. “Nakita, you will come with us this time, you have no choice. Lord Orochimaru has spoken.” With that, he disappeared to meet up with his master. “Damn, dad’s coming? I didn’t know it was that serious.” Something clicked in Itasuske’s head. *Dad?* He thought. So Nakita was the offspring of his creator. The one that his creator had said that he would replace. It did not matter to him, he loved her and that was it. He would still protect her from any danger that occurred. Plus this would give him the chance to use that new summoning that the old man had taught him!
Orochimaru arrived about ten minutes late3r. “Come, Nakita, you are no longer on that quest with those “friends” of yours, come back home. I need you for some tests that I want to run.” “You mean you want to use me to test out those jutsus that you develop!” Nakita fired back. “Heh heh heh, I guess you have gotten a bit cynical while you have been away from me. I can fix that.” Orochimaru said in a slightly threatening voice. “I am living by myself, and nothing you can do can change that!” Nakita exclaimed. Itasuske was in behind waterfall, in case talking did not work. “Oh, really, you think that you could stop me from taking you home?” Orochimaru said mockingly. “Surely your travels have not made you unwise to my power.” He said dangerously. “I have killed off a Taken, what is your greatest achievement? Almost taking down the leaf village?” She said acidly. “You will pay for your insolence!” He started rushing at her. Itasuske considered this the most opportune time to strike. He jumped out of the water fall and took Orochimaru down. They both got up at the same time. “Oh, look, my other failed experiment shows his ugly two-toned face.” His recognized his creators’ face, it was the same as before. “So, creator, how have you been since you abandoned me?” Itasuske asked in fake concern. “You know this reject is my creation, Nakita, why do you love him of all people? I could have given you a powerful ninja, like Sauske Uchiha!” “Why would I want a whiny cry-baby like Sauske? The one I have chosen, which you call a reject, was more than a match for Kabuto!” She countered. “Well, I do have to admit that I was not expecting to see young Itasuske so soon. It was a good surprise.” Orochi admitted. “But I taught you both everything you know, so how can you possibly think you could defeat me?” “Not everything.” Itasuske said as he went into his Dragoon fighting stance. “What is this? I have not seen a fighting style like this…” Orochi looked concerned . Something was not right in his head. Orochi had seen this fighting style, but it had been when he was a Chunin going on Jonin. It was one of the fighting styles he had not once defeated. How did Itasuske, who wasn’t even a Chunin, know this style? “Fine, I will call your bluff!” Orochi rushed at Itasuske and threw several snakes in his direction. Itasuske dodged the snakes and did a roll to crush the snakes before they could regroup. He popped back up on the same fighting stance. While Orochi was rushing Itasuske, Nakita stuck out a foot and tripped her father. “oops…..” She said with a small grin on her face. Kabuto came in and grabbed Nakita from behind, but all he grabbed was a log. “Look behind you!” Kabuto turned around, and got smacked in the face with a giant hammer that Nakita had hidden. As he went flying, she said “It goes high, it goes deep, it is………outa here! The winning home run hit by Nakita! wOOt!” “Grrrr, Kabuto, useless as usual.” Orochi said. While all this happened, Itasuske had time to make all the hand signs. “Summoning earth style: Dragon Summoning Jutsu!” When the smoke cleared, a small oriental dragon popped out of the ground. “Sup, boss! Name’s Goblin.” *anime disappointed face on Itasuske* “You….. aren’t Jugan……” “But I’m still a dragon! See!” *spits small amount of fire* “Go hide somewhere!” Itasuske exclaimed while Orochi rushed at him again. “Will do!” goblin said, and went straight for Nakita’s cleavage. But before he could get there, Goblin was smacked away by Nakita. “Perv….. NEVER TRY THAT AGAIN!!!!!!!!” she yelled at Goblin. *anime crying* “Ok,” Goblin said in a small voice. Orochi kept attacking, and was subsequently beaten back by Itasuske, but Itasuske tired faster than Orochi, for Itasuske had just done training with Nakita and was tired. After about the 9th rush, Orochi stopped. “Not a bad fighting stance. I will make another check in later. This has wasted too much of my precious time. I will return at a different time.” He disappeared and left them all alone. “So, when do I get my reward?” Goblin said. Both of them looked at him as though if he said one more thing, they would kill him. “Release!” Itasuske said. Instantly Goblin was gone. “What in the world did you try to do?” Nakita asked. “Tried to summon a dragon, which I did, but to a lesser degree.” Itasuske explained. “Well, next time get a better one. That one you summoned was a perv.” Nakita said. “Ok, got it.” Itasuske looked ashamed, he didn’t even think of the consequences of a botched summoning. Nakita saw that Itasuske was about to get depressed. “Hey, don’t get so down on yourself. You held off Orochimaru without using your Byakugan or Sharingan! What was that fighting style you used?” “The technique is called Dragoon. It took me all day yesterday to learn it, remember? Supposedly every three generations has one person who can use it. I guess I am that one.” “Well, now we don’t have to worry about dad for awhile.” Nakita said. “Yes, but for how long?” Itasuske wondered.
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Post by 1pokemon1 on Oct 3, 2007 16:16:53 GMT -5
That's so cool ohh mine's not as good as yours but can u read mine?
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Post by Chronos on Oct 3, 2007 16:23:59 GMT -5
which one is it? Nevermind, i'll look it up.
Btw, if anyone dosen't know this, this is my first time writing something in public.
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Post by shikakunscloud on Oct 3, 2007 16:27:36 GMT -5
very nice ^_^
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Post by 1pokemon1 on Oct 3, 2007 19:08:58 GMT -5
I agree AWESOME
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Post by xravenx on Oct 3, 2007 19:55:19 GMT -5
i still luv it! lol...u can actually keep me entertained without me getting distracted amazing...
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Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Oct 3, 2007 20:30:53 GMT -5
lol Great work buddy!
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Post by Chronos on Oct 5, 2007 2:31:26 GMT -5
wOOt! next part Itasuske was in his room, contemplating his future. Since Orochimaru’s appearance, Itasuske had a different set of goals. He needed to be prepared for anything and everything. He needed to protect his love. To do that, he thought, he must become familiar to every type of jutsu. He also needed to know how to remove poisons from the body, in case one of them got poisoned. He suddenly got a brain wave. Noah was from the Hyuga clan, which meant that he would know Lady Hinata! He got up quickly and ran to Noah, almost crashing into Nakita at the end of the hallway. “Dude, why are you in such a rush?” Nakita asked. “I…..need to see a person.” he said lamely. “Oohhhh, who?” “Noah, I need to talk to him about my work schedule.” It was a half-truth, but he didn’t think that him seeing another woman would be a good thing in Nakita’s book. “Ok, but be sure to come back later this evening, I have something for you!” she said. “Wouldn’t miss it for the world!” he said as he went toward Noah’s room. He went in. “Yes, Itasuske, what can I do for you?” Noah said. Itasuske looked him straight in the eye and said, “I need to see Lady Hinata.” Taken aback, Noah asked a reflexive question, “Why?” “Because I need to protect someone, and to do that, I need training for my Byakugan eye.” There was no use lying to him, that was not Itasuske’s style. “What you ask could be considered heresy. You know that, right?” Noah asked. “Yes, I do. I will accept the consequences.” Itasuske answered back. “Ok, then let us go.” The arrived at the Hyuga family grounds about 30 minutes. “Let me do all the talking.” Noah said. Itasuske nodded silently in agreement. Noah opened the door. And immediately before them, Hinata stood waiting for them. “Welcome, young Itasuske. You need training, yes?” They both were speechless. Since Noah was from the Cadet branch, he had not gotten to see Lady Hinata for personal training. How did this outsider get to do what he could not? It seemed a bit unfair. Itasuske went in first, not recognizing the niceties and leaving his sandals on. “You might want to…” But before Noah could say anything, a pot came flying at Itasuske. “What did I do?” he asked. “You forgot to take off your sandals.” Noah said quite simply. “So, if one does not take off one’s sandals, you get pots thrown at you?” Itasuske looked incredulous. “The niceties must be observed.” Noah said, taking his own sandals off. Itasuske mumbled something about grandmas and sucking eggs, but took off his sandals as well. “You have come to me asking that I be your guide along the path of your Byakugan and some of the healing arts. But, be warned, to learn the Byakugan, you must learn about your inner self.” Hinata said. “Let us explore your soul through meditation.” She concluded. About ten minutes later, Itasuske was a little antsy. “Uhhh, Lady Hinata, how long is this going to take?” Itasuske asked. “The knowledge of the Byakugan is not a path to a door, but a road leading forever towards the horizon.” Hinata said. “So, like, what, an hour or so?” Itasuske asked stupidly. “No, we have not even begun upon the path. Itasuske, you must learn patience.” “Yeah, patience, how long will that take?” He asked before he could think. Curse his smart mouth. Hinata looked at him coolly. “If my teachings are too slow for you, perhaps you can go somewhere else?” she said with her own unique humor. “No, I will stay here.” Itasuske said humbly. Within 7 hours, Itasuske had learned how to use the gentle fist style of attacking, and thought I could be excellent to be combined with his Dragoon style of fighting. “Now that you are sufficient in the gentle fist, I will teach you about how to heal by sealing off chakra points. She showed him that since the chakra network was so closely connected with the veins and major internal organs of the body, you could potentially bring someone back from the dead if you sealed off the right chakra points. “But I warn you. Do not try that unless it is the last resort. If you do try this technique, you could cripple the one you are trying to save.” “I’ll be sure to lay off the arms and legs then.” Itasuske said. “Right you are. I’m afraid I can’t teach you how to deal with poison, but I can teach you a jutsu that will make your blood, if it is clean, into a living anti-virus.” She taught him how to purify his blood of all toxins by concentrating his chakra into the blood. He then activated his Byakugan to see how it turned out. It wasn’t bad, and could prove to be a antidote in the field. “Thank you, Lady Hinata.” Itasuske bowed and stood up again. “It was a pleasure meeting you, Itasuske.” Hinata reciprocated. “It is getting late, I should head back.” “Make sure Noah doesn’t get into too much trouble.” Hinata called back as he started running off. That was quite the accomplishment, he thought to himself. He was drained, tired, and a bit hungry, but what else is training there for, huh? Not only did he know a new fighting style, but he learned about some medical jutsus and o purification jutsu, which could purify water as well, he had learned. He got home a bit late, and he started walking in through the door. He suddenly felt something hit his head. . “A chalkboard eraser? Who in the world?” Then it clicked. Nakita, she would pull a prank like this. He searched around and found her in the dining room, trying unsuccessfully to keep a straight face. “So,” she said. “is everything settled out?” “Yes, it is.” Itasuske said. “Then here, take this!” she lunged playfully at him. He rolled on the ground with her until they were both lying on their sides. “So was that what you wanted to give me?” Itasuske asked. “No, I wanted to give you this.” She kissed him. After they had broken away from it, Itasuske managed a small “wow, that was worth it.” before he went to sleep, exhausted. Meanwhile, the crow watched. Once Itasuske had fallen asleep, the crow flew off toward it’s true master. Once it had gotten there, the crow spoke to the owner. “Nice, very nice” a sultry female voice said. “But we must wait. He still knows not what he is.” a businessman like voice said. “True, true. But how long must we wait?” a impatient sounding man said. “The time is close at hand, do not worry.” the woman’s voice said again. When all the crows cleared off, only one person could be seen.
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Post by shikakunscloud on Oct 5, 2007 15:57:12 GMT -5
crows....an interesting twist
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Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Oct 5, 2007 16:33:46 GMT -5
who, what, when, where, why?? Who are they?! Taken? the suspense is killing me!!!
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Post by Chronos on Oct 5, 2007 17:46:18 GMT -5
If you look closely, it was only one person.
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Post by xravenx on Oct 5, 2007 20:34:04 GMT -5
creepy...jk....hm...interesting indeed!...
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Post by Twilight on Oct 5, 2007 23:46:05 GMT -5
Love it!
keep up the good work bro
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Post by Chronos on Oct 6, 2007 1:02:06 GMT -5
will do! ;D
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