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Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Sept 28, 2007 18:47:56 GMT -5
it's ok
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Post by .:)Mariah Wolff(:. on Sept 28, 2007 18:48:28 GMT -5
Nice Chronos....Keep it up!
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Post by Chronos on Sept 28, 2007 18:50:02 GMT -5
will do!
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Post by Chronos on Sept 28, 2007 23:52:12 GMT -5
the next instalment ;D Itasuske woke to the smell of something good. He quickly got dressed and went to the dining area. “Morning, lazy bum.” Nakita said. “What’s that? It smells really good!” His mouth was watering just at the smell of it. “Try it.” Nakita handed him a bowel of some sort of soup. He dug into it, eating the contents of the bowel in a matter of seconds. “Just as good as it smelled, what was it?” “Snake stew.” Nakita had a small smile on her lips. “WHA?!?!? YOU FED ME SNAKE?” Itasuske suddenly felt as though he could still feel the snakes in his stomach. “Yep, it’s my specialty.” She seemed like she was quite enjoying this. “Well…. I guess it did taste good, you have more?” Itasuske was quick on recovering, having eaten only one thing weirder in his life. “Usually people throw up when they hear what it is, I guess you are special.” The morning was uneventful. Itasuske trained and kept trying to get the same feeling as yesterday. What was that? Did it come out only when his life was in danger? Then he focused, only thinking about that feeling. He noticed his chakra focusing on his eye. He got it. He let the chakra explode in that area, and he knew he had got it right. He could see all around him, and not just in the field. He could see all the way to the cottage, which was a good mile away. He was looking through out the cottage, and noticed he could hone into specific targets. This certainly was a interesting ability. He shut off his eye, which he had learned was called the Byakugan from lore he had heard. He went into the cottage, being a little tired from the experimentation of his eye. He went into his sleeping area, and found a book lying there. He opened it, but found all the pages blank, except one, which read “Meet me in the back.” He sighed, did everyone like toying with him? Oh well, might as well. He went outside to find Nakita standing opposite him. “Look, I know you’re different, I can see it in your eyes and in your posture. So, I want to have a little sparing to asses your abilities.” With that, she threw several shuriken in his direction. Quickly dodging them, Itasuske took out is kunai, and started looking for a slip up. Nakita, not impressed, took out her own kunai and rushed toward him. He got himself prepared, but then heard “do you think you can beat me?” in his head. This threw him off balance, and was not prepared for the strike on his arms. Having been cut, Itasuske quickly took several steps back. “What in the world was that?!?” he exclaimed. “You shouldn’t become distracted when you have a enemy approaching you. Ninja basics 101.” Nakita smiled that small smile of hers, only this time it was a little unnerving. “Ok, give me a second chance. I will not be distracted this time.” Itasuske had a little something planned for her this time. Nakita rushed again, bringing her kunai to bear. Then 3 kunai came out of nowhere and were heading for Itasuske. Clever, he thought, but not enough. He jumped, dodging the kunai, and landed his feet on a nearby tree, which he propelled himself off of and rushed headlong at Nakita. Surprised at Itasuske’s ingenuity, she just stood there. When Itasuske buried his Kunai into her arm, all he heard was *poof* and knew he was in for it. Nakita was right below him, looking up at the flying ninja. All she had to do was reach up her arm, grab Itasuske, and swing him downward. He landed on the ground with a *thud* , but did manage to land a firm kick to the chin with his free foot. She let him go, and with a satisfied grin, said “ouch, nice kick. Where did you learn that from?” “I didn’t, it’s just become a reflex from all the years I’ve been on the road.” Itasuske got up and dusted himself off. “Nice substitution, by the way.” She smiled, stretched, and said “let’s grab some lunch.” After lunch, Itasuske heard a knock at the door. “I’ll get it.” Nakita said. While he was cleaning the table, Itasuske heard shouting come from the doorway. He want to investigate, and saw Nakita and a man with glasses and white hair with a sound headband arguing. “No, Kabuto, I don’t want to go back!” “Well, I have been told to bring you back at any cost. So either come quietly, or I will be forced to bring you back with force. Itasuske came in “Hey, buddy, she can do what she wants!” “Foolish boy, you know not….” The man had seen Itasuske’s eyes, and looked like he had seen a ghost. “I know not what? That you are a perv who wants to take a 16 year old by force? You must be completely deranged if you think she would come quietly!” “Boy, you are asking for it!” the man, apparently named Kabuto, said. Kabuto, that name rang a bell, somehow. Then he remembered. Kabuto, the man who kicked him when his training had already exhausted him. Kabuto, the lapdog of his father. Kabuto, the ignoramus who would never leave him alone. Kabuto, Kabuto, Kabuto. It was all he could think of. Then he snapped back into reality, and saw him standing there, ripe for the beating of his life. But before he could land one blow, Kabuto had already hit him in the solo plexus, knocking the wind out of him. Kabuto then did the same to Nakita in the same instant, and collected her body. He was about to leave, when Itasuske cried out “KABUTO! WE HAVE A SCORE TO SETTLE!” Kabuto looked back, dropped Nakita on the ground carefully, and turned to Itasuske. “Ok, bring it, you little punk.” Itasuske rushed toward him and was about to strike, when he noticed Kabuto making hand signs. He quickly got out of range, just as Kabuto said “Urani Temple (Feather Illusion) Jutsu!” Itasuske knew that Nakita would be out for awhile, but he could still fight. He rushed at Kabuto again, and this time made contact. Itasuske had hit Kabuto’s leg with his kunai. Kabuto, sensing a opening, kicked Itasuske up into the air with his other leg. “Chakra Scalpel Jutsu!” and hit Itasuske in is midsection and his legs. “That should take care of you. Now I must leave.” Kabuto collected Nakita, and started walking away. Itasuske stared at Kabuto with a intense rage. Why wasn’t he strong enough to even land a critical blow on that punk Kabuto? Then, that rage turned to focus, as he made the damaged chakra points on his body closed so that other ones could take their place. He got up again, and noticed something different, again. Everything seemed a bit slower, and he could tell what was going to happen before it did. “KABUTO!” Itasuske yelled again. Kabuto looked back, flabbergasted that the boy could even stand, and to top it off, the boy had his Sharingan activated! “Looks like I underestimated him. A mistake I do not intend to make twice.” Kabuto then rushed in to Itasuske, knowing what the boy would do in response, or so he thought. He thought wrong. Itasuske then switched his eyes over and saw Kabuto’s chakra points. Dodging Kabuto’s strikes, he quickly diminished Kabuto’s chakra until he had none left. Itasuske then kicked Kabuto in the midsection, knocking the wind out of him. “Tell your master that he cannot have Nakita. Not now, not ever.” Itasuske collected Nakita and went back to the cottage. “Damn, that boy has developed himself well. I must tell Lord Orochimaru.” With that, and much pain, he got up and went as fast as he could to Orochimaru. As Nakita woke up. She smelled something good. She went into the eating area and said “What ya got cooking?” All Itasuske did was hand her a bowel. She looked at him slyly, “What is it?” “If it is good, who cares?” Itasuske said. She ate it, carefully, trying to discern what it was. She finished, and said “Ok, I’m stumped. It does taste good, but what in the world is it?” Itasuske had a small smile on his face. “Slug and Toad soup. I learned it from a kind lady whom I met on the road.” Nakita paused, then exclaimed “SLUG AND TOAD?!?!?!? WHO IN THE WORLD COMBINES THOSE THINGS TO MAKE A SOUP?”
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Post by Twilight on Sept 29, 2007 1:33:37 GMT -5
It made me laugh and during the fight I was wondering whether you'd win or not
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Post by xravenx on Sept 29, 2007 1:35:26 GMT -5
haha slugs and toads! Nice job!
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Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Sept 29, 2007 6:57:49 GMT -5
nice... uh-oh I think I hear Sanin coming to knock on your door Chronos XD
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Post by Twilight on Sept 29, 2007 22:48:31 GMT -5
The ANBU are gonna come get you chronos
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Post by .:)Mariah Wolff(:. on Sept 30, 2007 14:36:29 GMT -5
Slugs and toads? Did you make that up? Nasty! LOL. Nice - I love your FanFic it's fantastic.
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Post by Chronos on Sept 30, 2007 16:03:23 GMT -5
Next part. Three months had passed by so fast, he thought to himself. Three months since he had kicked Kabuto's rear end. They had moved out of the cottage, for obvious reasons. Though that damned bird kept with them, no matter where they went. Nakita had also decided that she was going to lead them to another spot she thought would be safe. But before that, something else caught her attention. "Itasuske, you need new clothes. The one outfit you have now is too small and smells vaguely like salt water." Itasuske looked at her. “Your not gonna..." "Yep, we're going clothes shopping." Itasuske thought of a quick excuse. "But we have no money!" "So we can find jobs" Nakita said coolly. Come hell or high water, Nakita was going to get him to wear something different. She used had a idea. She quickly make a very cute chibi face. “Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? “ “Can’t….resist…..chibi stare……. Ok.” Nakita returned to normal. “Yay!” They reached a town that looked promising a day later. They went into town, and right away they found a inn that had a help wanted poster outside of it. They went inside, and saw that no one was in there besides them. A Young man stepped out, an=bout Itasuske’s age, maybe a year younger. Itasuske then noticed the young mans eyes. Completely gray. A Hyuga, running a inn? H considered to himself *stranger things have happened.* "We are here to have you put away that sign, sir."Nakita said. The owner then pointed to Itasuske and had him stand in the dojo to moderate the battles and to teach when necessary. He appointed Nakita to be the Hostess. Itasuske did not like his job, but if it made Nakita happy, he would bear it. Nakita did not enjoy her job either, but then, she knew the pay was good so she stuck with it. The one thing that as not answered, Itasuske asked for the manager for his name. "Noah, that is all you need to hear" and Noah walked off. A woman was passing through, and decided she was going to visit a old friend. She went into Noah’s inn and was surprised to find Nakita there. The woman ran up to her and gave Nakita a big hug. “So, Kaori, still the Hokage in training I see” “Yep, but you wouldn’t believe how boring it is, having Naruto as a teacher and all.” She even sounded bored. “Tell ya what, how about we have a quick sparring match, to see how far we have both come since we last met?” Nakita had a little smile on her face. “Ok, that sounds fun!” Kaori liked the idea of testing her abilities. They went to the dojo, and when Kaori opened the door, she got a pleasant surprise. Itasuske stood there, waiting to judicate the match. She was about to run up to him, but Nakita put a hand on her shoulder. “He doesn’t know who you are. Don’t do anything that would confuse him.” Kaori held back. He was one of her best friends though. He seemed a lot younger than she remember. “How old is he?” “About our age. I know it is a shock, but we met about 3 months ago.” “Wow, a young Itasuske, this is certainly interesting.” They both walked through the doorway, prompting Itasuske to stand in the Judicator spot. He recognized Nakita, and had a strange sense he knew the other woman as well. “Names and titles, if you have them,” he addressed both of them. “Nakita, Snakebane” “Kaori, future Hokage.” Itasuske was confused. Snakebane, future Hokage? These were strange titles. “Stipulations?” “Taijutsu only?” Nakita offered. “This place is too small to have a full fledged battle.” “And cannot go outside of the boundary.” Kaori added, pointing to the red line at the outside of the mat. “Fine, begin.” The two kanoichi started trading blows, each one seeming to be the same after the other had hit the other. “You have improved since we last met,” Nakita said. “Well, I knew training with Gai-sensei wasn’t going to be a waste.” She demonstrated her training by kicking Nakita in the chin, making her fly. Itasuske jumped in. “Lotus is strictly forbidden in this dojo.” Nakita landed feet first. “Not bad, I have to give you props for that.” “Party pooper.” Kaori said to Itasuske. “Just doing my job, Kaori” “Looks like I am outside of the boundary. You win, Kaori.” Nakita had landed beyond the boundary . “That was fun,” Kaori said. “We should do it again sometime.” Nakita finished for her. After a week, They both had enough money to get Itasuske some new clothes. They went to the nearest robe maker. “We want a custom job.” Itasuske said. The store owner smiled, thinking about the money he was going to make. “What will it be then? And for who?” Nakita stepped in. “I know how expensive you think you can make it. Don’t.” The dangerous look in Nakita’s eyes made the man completely forget about his greed. “Wha-what will it be?” “That’s better.” Nakita had that smile on her face. They fitted Itasuske in a robe of all black, that suited his physique. He was happy with everything, but he needed one thing to make it his. He put a white rose on the back of his robe. “Why a rose? That doesn’t seem very intimidating,” Nakita was not impressed with his choice of sign. “Because the white rose is a sign of rebirth. And since I am no longer going to be used as a killing machine, I feel like I have been born again.” They paid the clothes dealer, then went outside. “You know, that was a good choice of a sign. I am happy for it.” Nakita went up to Itasuske. “I think rebirth is a blessing you get once in a lifetime.” She was right in his face. He decided to go for it. He kissed her. After a few seconds, Nakita responded. She held it for a few seconds, then broke away. She then hammered him on the head. “Never do that in public again!” “Yes ma’am” he said, clutching his head.
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Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Sept 30, 2007 16:13:34 GMT -5
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *squels* lol go nakita Nakita: ... *blush* WTF?
LOVE IT!!!!! wOOt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Noah Hyuga on Sept 30, 2007 22:54:32 GMT -5
ROTFLOL!!
Why am i so mysterious though?! And where's Mariah?! And Twilight?! lol
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Post by .:)Mariah Wolff(:. on Oct 1, 2007 18:51:50 GMT -5
LOL! I love this.... "Can’t…resist...chibi stare……" Nice. And chill Noah...
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Post by shikakunscloud on Oct 1, 2007 19:05:44 GMT -5
I love it!!!!! so happy to be in it and it's amazingly well written!
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Post by Twilight on Oct 1, 2007 19:07:18 GMT -5
Once again, well done my friend
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