Post by Legendtaker117 on Jun 28, 2007 1:28:49 GMT -5
I wrote a fan fiction that I will be releasing in chapters, Im gonna try to make it an on going series. Chapters are not long and I will try to post at least 2 or more a weak. Some will end with cliff hangars.
I want to warn people that it is meant for a mature audience only and the first chapter is fine, nothing bad in it. The reason is I want to know if its alright if I post a mature fan fiction. If not I will only post it on my forum.
A Dark Secret
Chapter One
----- A pale young man, with long black hair that fell down to his shoulders walked through the streets of Konoha, seamlessly through the crowd without notice. A warn, blood stained katana strapped to his back, was hidden by his black robe that dragged across the dirt of the streets. His orange slit eyes were hidden by his hair as he held his head down to hide his face. His bare feet weren’t noticeable.
-------He quickly became lost walking through the huge village of Konoha. He silently sat down at a Ramen shop nearby. It was a small and decent place. An old man started walking towards him from the other side of the counter. A young women was sturing the ramen with the soup for a young boy sitting a couple seats down. His bright yellow hair and cheerful attitude annoyed him, as the boy asked for more. “Whats your name traveler” asked the old man
“My name is none of your concern. All I want to know is where I can find a person named Gai”
“Well traveler, there’s no need to..”
------The yellow haired boy interrupted “ HEY!!! There’s no need to be so cruel to the old man!!! He just asked your na…”
------The pale young man glanced at the boy with his slit eye. The boy stopped. He had a shocked look on his face, he knew something was wasn’t right with this man. The pale person lifted himself from his seat and walked off. He knew the boy knew something, so he walked into an ally behind the Ramen shop. After awhile the boy finally came from out of the shop. He seemed clumsy and stupid, which worked in the pale mans favor.
------He followed the boy to a dojo. He figured he’d wait until the boy used the restroom and kill him there, then a man in a green out fit walked out. Another boy came running towards the man “Gai-sensai, lets train. We can do a hundred laps around the village, NO two hundred.”
------“I cant right now, this beautiful beast of Konoha has a mission to fulfill” he said crying doing a weird pose. Could this guy really be the great Mighto Gai he thought to himself as he pulled a Kunai from within his robe. ”What a fool, this shall be easier than I thought.” He said to himself. He waited until Gai started to walk down the street. The pale man followed Gai about 3 miles out of the gates of Konoha.
-------“I know you’ve been following me since I left the dojo” Gai said with a smirk on his face “Who are you” Gai turned around. How could he see me, I was perfectly hidden he said to himself. The Pale figure stepped from out of the trees shadow.
-------“I am Kaoru, your death dealer. Are you prepared for the other world…GAI!” Kaoru said with a wide grin, as he licked his lips.”
Chapter Finish
I want to warn people that it is meant for a mature audience only and the first chapter is fine, nothing bad in it. The reason is I want to know if its alright if I post a mature fan fiction. If not I will only post it on my forum.
A Dark Secret
Chapter One
----- A pale young man, with long black hair that fell down to his shoulders walked through the streets of Konoha, seamlessly through the crowd without notice. A warn, blood stained katana strapped to his back, was hidden by his black robe that dragged across the dirt of the streets. His orange slit eyes were hidden by his hair as he held his head down to hide his face. His bare feet weren’t noticeable.
-------He quickly became lost walking through the huge village of Konoha. He silently sat down at a Ramen shop nearby. It was a small and decent place. An old man started walking towards him from the other side of the counter. A young women was sturing the ramen with the soup for a young boy sitting a couple seats down. His bright yellow hair and cheerful attitude annoyed him, as the boy asked for more. “Whats your name traveler” asked the old man
“My name is none of your concern. All I want to know is where I can find a person named Gai”
“Well traveler, there’s no need to..”
------The yellow haired boy interrupted “ HEY!!! There’s no need to be so cruel to the old man!!! He just asked your na…”
------The pale young man glanced at the boy with his slit eye. The boy stopped. He had a shocked look on his face, he knew something was wasn’t right with this man. The pale person lifted himself from his seat and walked off. He knew the boy knew something, so he walked into an ally behind the Ramen shop. After awhile the boy finally came from out of the shop. He seemed clumsy and stupid, which worked in the pale mans favor.
------He followed the boy to a dojo. He figured he’d wait until the boy used the restroom and kill him there, then a man in a green out fit walked out. Another boy came running towards the man “Gai-sensai, lets train. We can do a hundred laps around the village, NO two hundred.”
------“I cant right now, this beautiful beast of Konoha has a mission to fulfill” he said crying doing a weird pose. Could this guy really be the great Mighto Gai he thought to himself as he pulled a Kunai from within his robe. ”What a fool, this shall be easier than I thought.” He said to himself. He waited until Gai started to walk down the street. The pale man followed Gai about 3 miles out of the gates of Konoha.
-------“I know you’ve been following me since I left the dojo” Gai said with a smirk on his face “Who are you” Gai turned around. How could he see me, I was perfectly hidden he said to himself. The Pale figure stepped from out of the trees shadow.
-------“I am Kaoru, your death dealer. Are you prepared for the other world…GAI!” Kaoru said with a wide grin, as he licked his lips.”
Chapter Finish
*fall back* *thud*
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