Post by BD-Blue Dragon on Apr 30, 2007 18:50:02 GMT -5
Greeting, my name is Adam Davies and my story is base on the Television show, Naruto. The story is about the ninja from the Village of Flame, Blue Dragon. The first paragraph is the biography of Blue Dragon.
Blue Dragon, one of the last members from Dragonal clan, is training to kill his brother, Black Dragon. Black Dragon is responsible for the damage he caused at the Village of Flame, leading an army from the Water Village. Blue Dragon help rebuild the village by using the power he received, his blood trait. Then after the village rebuild, Black Dragon attack again, but failed. Blue Dragon stops his attack and attack with his most powerful jutsu, Blue Flame Jutsu. The army turn out it one of Black Dragon clone, Clonifictation Jutsu. Black Dragon know his brother can kill him, so he escape and never seen again. Blue Dragon, realize Black Dragon escape, took ninja school and become a ninja. Blue Dragon travel to find his brother, then he met Shard from Metal Village, which is already destroyed, and the story begins.
“Hi,” Shard says, “where you come from?” Blue Dragon reply, “I come from the Village of Flame, what you want?” Shard replies back, “I’m looking for the good ninja to join my group, you want to join?” Blue Dragon said, “Sure, I need some target practice.” Shard said, “Really? I fight you!” Blue Dragon replied, “Whatever, you ready?” Shard replied, “Bring it!” As the fight continues, Blue Dragon comes out the winner. “NO FAIR!” cried out by Shard, “YOU CHEATED!” Blue Dragon calmly replied, “You know you trip over a rock, you know I put my foot on top of you, and you know you admit defeat.” Shard replied, “Sure, I’m watching you.” Blue Dragon said, “We traveling together so you see me all the time.” As Blue Dragon and Shard travel, there a vociferous sound coming from the tree, “STOP!” Blue Dragon and Shard did stop and Shard get scared and he know he will win so he stop and cried out, “SHOW YOURSELF!” Unknown ninja jump out of the tree and show himself and said, “My name is Smoke, the distraction ninja.” “Oh yeah,” Shard cried out, “prove yourself.” Smoke point to the tree behind Shard and said, “What that over there?” Shard look back, realize there nothing back there so he look back at Smoke and saw him close to his face, “Ahh!” Shard jump back. Blue Dragon said, “You are a distracted ninja, will you join us as the third person?” “Sure,” Smoke said, “I got nothing else to do.” Blue Dragon, Shard, and Smoke call themselves “The Trio Squad.” They got the expert ninja training them named, Biakan.
Blue Dragon and Shard meet at the meeting point and wondering where Smoke and Biakan are. “Where are they?” Shard asks, “they need to be here.” “I know, they late for training,” Blue Dragon replied. “Who miss me?” Smoke appeared out of nowhere. “Ahh!” Shard cried out, “stop doing that!” There a guffaw coming from Biakan, who is nowhere in sight, “looking for me?” Blue Dragon cried out, “Sensei, you’re late.” Biakan reply, “Naw, I’m right here all along.” Shard cried out, “Where are you?” Biakan replied, “That part one of your training, you need to find me and take my ribbons and you pass, however, there only two ribbons so you better be quick if you want to take a break.” Smoke said, “I got no problem, I can get it in the flash.” “Done,” Blue Dragon holding a ribbon, “that was easy.” Shard cried out, “How you do that?” Biakan reply, “He does have some speed going on, according to my documentation he is the last member of the Dragonal Clan.” Shard said, “How is that good?” Biakan replied, “They got everything! Speed, Power, and Brain! They have one weakness and that is their personally, people don’t like them.” Blue Dragon said, “It true, I been bullied around during ninja school.” Shard said, “Why am I standing here for, I got to get that ribbon!” “Too late,” Smoke said, holding out the ribbon, “see.” Shard, knowing he in trouble, said, “This is hopeless, I never been a good ninja.” Smoke reply, “Hey, it not that bad, you need practice.” Shard asks, “You think so?” Biakan replied, “Of course, that why I’m here, to give you guys some training.” There a huge clamor coming from a group of people. Blue Dragon ask, “What going on?” One man scarily replied, “Black Dragon attacking our city! You must help us!” Blue Dragon quickly asks, “Where?” Man replied while he point down the road, “Go that way, quickly!” Blue Dragon tells his teammate, “I must go, and don’t you ever help me fight!” Blue Dragon run down the road, Biakan said to his student, “Leave him be, he wanted revenge.”
Blue Dragon found a black fire burning; he knew that was Black Dragon’s Black Fire Jutsu. He made to the village and he saw Black Dragon standing in the middle of burning village, Black Dragon said, “Why do you interrupted me?” Blue Dragon reply back, “You know I want to kill you, you will die!” As Blue Dragon run after him, Black Dragon disappeared and then reappear knock Blue Dragon down. Blue Dragon looks back and can’t believe it, Eye of Dragon have been activate in Black Dragon. Black Dragon asks, “What the matter? You can’t believe that I have the eye?” Blue Dragon cried out, “I don’t care! I can still kill you!” All of the sudden, Blue Dragon having the experience, that the Eye of Dragon is beginning to activate. Blue Dragon cried out, “What happening to me?” Black Dragon replied, “The Eye of Dragon beginning to activate in you, but it is omission.”
This is part one of the story. There should be about eight parts of the whole story. Blue Dragon’s first power, the Eye of Dragon, have been activate and Black Dragon want him to join his side and attack the village. Shard, Smoke, and Biakan are still back at the training ground, wanting to help Blue Dragon but he said, “I must go, and don’t you ever help me fight!” The story continued on the next part.
I can't resist it.
Blue Dragon, one of the last members from Dragonal clan, is training to kill his brother, Black Dragon. Black Dragon is responsible for the damage he caused at the Village of Flame, leading an army from the Water Village. Blue Dragon help rebuild the village by using the power he received, his blood trait. Then after the village rebuild, Black Dragon attack again, but failed. Blue Dragon stops his attack and attack with his most powerful jutsu, Blue Flame Jutsu. The army turn out it one of Black Dragon clone, Clonifictation Jutsu. Black Dragon know his brother can kill him, so he escape and never seen again. Blue Dragon, realize Black Dragon escape, took ninja school and become a ninja. Blue Dragon travel to find his brother, then he met Shard from Metal Village, which is already destroyed, and the story begins.
“Hi,” Shard says, “where you come from?” Blue Dragon reply, “I come from the Village of Flame, what you want?” Shard replies back, “I’m looking for the good ninja to join my group, you want to join?” Blue Dragon said, “Sure, I need some target practice.” Shard said, “Really? I fight you!” Blue Dragon replied, “Whatever, you ready?” Shard replied, “Bring it!” As the fight continues, Blue Dragon comes out the winner. “NO FAIR!” cried out by Shard, “YOU CHEATED!” Blue Dragon calmly replied, “You know you trip over a rock, you know I put my foot on top of you, and you know you admit defeat.” Shard replied, “Sure, I’m watching you.” Blue Dragon said, “We traveling together so you see me all the time.” As Blue Dragon and Shard travel, there a vociferous sound coming from the tree, “STOP!” Blue Dragon and Shard did stop and Shard get scared and he know he will win so he stop and cried out, “SHOW YOURSELF!” Unknown ninja jump out of the tree and show himself and said, “My name is Smoke, the distraction ninja.” “Oh yeah,” Shard cried out, “prove yourself.” Smoke point to the tree behind Shard and said, “What that over there?” Shard look back, realize there nothing back there so he look back at Smoke and saw him close to his face, “Ahh!” Shard jump back. Blue Dragon said, “You are a distracted ninja, will you join us as the third person?” “Sure,” Smoke said, “I got nothing else to do.” Blue Dragon, Shard, and Smoke call themselves “The Trio Squad.” They got the expert ninja training them named, Biakan.
Blue Dragon and Shard meet at the meeting point and wondering where Smoke and Biakan are. “Where are they?” Shard asks, “they need to be here.” “I know, they late for training,” Blue Dragon replied. “Who miss me?” Smoke appeared out of nowhere. “Ahh!” Shard cried out, “stop doing that!” There a guffaw coming from Biakan, who is nowhere in sight, “looking for me?” Blue Dragon cried out, “Sensei, you’re late.” Biakan reply, “Naw, I’m right here all along.” Shard cried out, “Where are you?” Biakan replied, “That part one of your training, you need to find me and take my ribbons and you pass, however, there only two ribbons so you better be quick if you want to take a break.” Smoke said, “I got no problem, I can get it in the flash.” “Done,” Blue Dragon holding a ribbon, “that was easy.” Shard cried out, “How you do that?” Biakan reply, “He does have some speed going on, according to my documentation he is the last member of the Dragonal Clan.” Shard said, “How is that good?” Biakan replied, “They got everything! Speed, Power, and Brain! They have one weakness and that is their personally, people don’t like them.” Blue Dragon said, “It true, I been bullied around during ninja school.” Shard said, “Why am I standing here for, I got to get that ribbon!” “Too late,” Smoke said, holding out the ribbon, “see.” Shard, knowing he in trouble, said, “This is hopeless, I never been a good ninja.” Smoke reply, “Hey, it not that bad, you need practice.” Shard asks, “You think so?” Biakan replied, “Of course, that why I’m here, to give you guys some training.” There a huge clamor coming from a group of people. Blue Dragon ask, “What going on?” One man scarily replied, “Black Dragon attacking our city! You must help us!” Blue Dragon quickly asks, “Where?” Man replied while he point down the road, “Go that way, quickly!” Blue Dragon tells his teammate, “I must go, and don’t you ever help me fight!” Blue Dragon run down the road, Biakan said to his student, “Leave him be, he wanted revenge.”
Blue Dragon found a black fire burning; he knew that was Black Dragon’s Black Fire Jutsu. He made to the village and he saw Black Dragon standing in the middle of burning village, Black Dragon said, “Why do you interrupted me?” Blue Dragon reply back, “You know I want to kill you, you will die!” As Blue Dragon run after him, Black Dragon disappeared and then reappear knock Blue Dragon down. Blue Dragon looks back and can’t believe it, Eye of Dragon have been activate in Black Dragon. Black Dragon asks, “What the matter? You can’t believe that I have the eye?” Blue Dragon cried out, “I don’t care! I can still kill you!” All of the sudden, Blue Dragon having the experience, that the Eye of Dragon is beginning to activate. Blue Dragon cried out, “What happening to me?” Black Dragon replied, “The Eye of Dragon beginning to activate in you, but it is omission.”
This is part one of the story. There should be about eight parts of the whole story. Blue Dragon’s first power, the Eye of Dragon, have been activate and Black Dragon want him to join his side and attack the village. Shard, Smoke, and Biakan are still back at the training ground, wanting to help Blue Dragon but he said, “I must go, and don’t you ever help me fight!” The story continued on the next part.
I can't resist it.
