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Post by xravenx on Feb 3, 2008 1:25:21 GMT -5
ah smart Tsunade...comparing Orochimaru to a god? who knew...lol good part though!
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Post by Chronos on Feb 3, 2008 1:52:59 GMT -5
tres cool. Not like i have read this part before. lol. Nayway, keep it up! We like having new material, and you know me, anything can inspire me to write in my story. lol
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Feb 6, 2008 21:09:54 GMT -5
Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Feb 6, 2008 21:09:54 GMT -5
Sorry for not posting in a while, but I had to edit it. I orginally was writing this for quizilla.com so everything was "you" but then Chronos told me to post it on here so.. yeah. lol. Enjoy!
When she walked through the door, two midgets attacked her. They clung themselves to her legs and wouldn’t let go. “Hey, guys!” Chie yelped out as she lost your balance and fell. “Where were you?!” Seiji asked. “You weren’t in bed when we went in there to wake you up!” “I was on a walk,” she said, trying to pull Ken and Seiji off. “I wrote a note.” “You did?” Ken asked, a confused chibi.
“Yes she did,” Jun said walking into view from the kitchen. “Then why didn’t you…” “I was about to tell you before you attached yourselves to your sister.” Ken and Seiji let go of Chie and looked away from their mother with embarrassed faces on. Chie gave them a soft smile and patted their heads. They both looked at she and smiled sheepishly. “It’s ok guys,” she said. She smelt a sweet smelling aroma coming from the kitchen. “Is that pancakes I smell?” Both Ken and Seiji ran to the kitchen and sat in their seats. Chie chuckled to herself and walked to her seat.
~* That afternoon *~ “Mom I’m going out!” Chie hollered as she walked out the door. “Not so fast, Onee-chan,” Ken said from behind her, “you said that you were going to train us today.” “I know,” she smiled, “I said I was going to have a surprise for you, didn’t I? I’m going to get it.” “Really?” “Of course, why else would I be going out?” Before Ken could say anything else, she left.
Once she was near the forest, Chie ran in a full sprit and made it to the training spot in a matter of seconds. When she arrived, Jiraiya jump, literally, 5 ft. in the air. “Would you not do that?!” he panted out, holding a hand at his chest. “More importantly, how can you do that?” Tsunade and Orochimaru standing there as well and Chie looked at them. Orochimaru shrugged and Tsunade nodded. “Ok Jiraiya-san, you want to know why I’m faster than an average human, correct?” she asked going right to him. He nodded and she moved her hair behind her ear. Jiraiya turned white and jumped 6.5 ft in the air. “HOLY SHIT!” he yelped out. Chie, Tsunade, and Orochimaru laughed. “Oh c’mon Jiraiya, is it that much of a surprise?” Tsunade asked, “After all you were the one making all the ‘cat’ comments.” “You mean you guys already knew?!” Jiraiya asked with his mouth gapping open. “Yeah ‘cause Tsunade-chan’s been my friend for, like, ever,” Chie explained before anyone started fighting, “and Orochimaru-san found it out on his own. OK so Tsunade-chan, we’re here, so get started on your requirements.” Tsunade nodded. “Ok so we all know that Chie-chan’s father is here and she hates him…” “Hell yeah,” she interrupted quickly. Tsunade ignored her and continued. “So I had the idea for spending the night at my house, all of us, since Riku believes that Chie-chan has a mission with Orochimaru. So how about it guys?”
“I’m up for it,” Chie said almost immediately. Orochimaru gave a shrug and Jiraiya agreed as well. “Ok so come to my house around 7, sound good?” The three of them nodded to her. She nodded and said, “Well I got to go now so see you guys later,” and left. Jiraiya left quickly after saying something along the lines of “research.”
“Hey Orochimaru-san, I’ve got a favor to ask you,” Chie said to her only companion left. He turned to her, indicating that he was listening. “Will you come and help me train Ken and Seiji? I promised them a surprise in training last night so… will you?” The snake nodded and said, “I don’t see why not, I don’t have any plans for today.” She gave him a smile and the two of them walk to the Kisaruga house.
As they arrived at the house, Ken and Seiji were throwing kunai and shuriken at a target. Chie glanced at the window and saw Riku there. She glared at him, knowing he was looking at her, and turned herself to her brothers’ progress. Orochimaru was already behind them and, apparently, they did not know he was there. She rolled her eyes as he tapped them both on their shoulders. They quickly turned around with kunai in their hands and a fighting stance. “Nice reflexes,” Chie smiled at them. Ken and Seiji looked to her with huge smiles on. “Onee-chan is Orochimaru-sempai going to train us too?” Seiji asked. He had seemed to like Orochimaru over Jiraiya, which is a surprise. Seiji is the immature brother and Orochimaru is the mature friend. Strange combination. “No, he’s here to help us bake cookies for the Hokage,” she says with sarcasm. Ken and Seiji turned to each other and gave each other a high-five. Chie walked over to the boys and examined their work. She noticed that Ken was using kunai and Seiji was using shuriken. “Why are you guys only using one tool?” “I can’t throw shuriken that good,” Ken said, “I don’t know how Seiji does it.” She looked at your youngest brother and he nodded. Chie sighed and looked at Orochimaru. “Wanna teach them the basics before going on?” Being a person that thinks ahead, she already had something planed that would surely help the boys with up-coming tests and exams. Also it’ll be a good review for her and Orochimaru. The snake ninja nodded and he turned to little Seiji and started to explain the basics of throwing kunai, while she went over to Ken and explained shuriken.
~* Masaru POV *~ He walked into the house when he saw Chie and her friend training his sons. He smiled to himself, enjoying how Chie loved the boys. When Jun was pregnant with Ken, Masaru was worried that Chie might not accept him. But she begged to hold him when he was brought home. It was the same with Seiji. She would always volunteer to watch over them for him and Jun. At first, he thought it was because she was an only child and wanted someone to play with, but now he could see that she just wanted to try and erase Riku from the picture. Even at a young age she hated him with passion.
Anyway, Masaru was walking by the kitchen when he heard his wife’s voice. “Must she really have to go?” she asked, her voice threatening to crack. “Yes, her aging has already stopped and she doesn’t need any more attachments,” Riku’s voice said simply, no trace of emotion what so ever. “But she’s still a child, Riku.” “More of a reason for her to leave now.” “But she needs to learn her Kekkei Genkai, still!” “According to you, only a few posses it. You were the only one in your generation.”
“Now what’s this about Chie leaving?” he asked, walking in. Being part demon, Chie was supposed to have a longer life span and she hasn’t really changed that much lately. The two turned to him and Riku sent a glare. “What concerns my daughter does not concern you, Renski,” he said. “Maybe so,” Masaru said, sending him his own glare, “I believe that Chie should have a say in this.”
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Feb 6, 2008 21:24:10 GMT -5
Post by Chronos on Feb 6, 2008 21:24:10 GMT -5
Ah, another good part written down. Keep it up, I want to know what happens to Chie! lol
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Feb 6, 2008 22:47:53 GMT -5
Post by xravenx on Feb 6, 2008 22:47:53 GMT -5
lol yeah when is the next update? haha it be good!
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Feb 7, 2008 18:42:53 GMT -5
Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Feb 7, 2008 18:42:53 GMT -5
UPDATE IS NOW!
“Ok you two understand now?” Chie asked, moving some hair out of her face. Her brothers nodded and she turned to Orochimaru and nodded. “Ok now listen up, this is the fun part. Now we’re going to go through a mission situation. You two are the one’s in charge and Orochimaru-san and I are your comrades. You two are against each other. What we are doing is to take these scrolls,” she pulled out two scrolls from her pockets, “and bring them back here. We will be starting… 3 miles away in different places. The point of the mission is to protect your scroll from the enemy and bringing it safely here. Understood?”
“But wouldn’t it be cheating for whoever has you on their team, Onee-chan?” Seiji asked. “There are no fair plays,” she said, smiling, “Imagine all the jutsus you know and then multiply that by thousands and you wouldn’t even get all the jutsus.” “And remember the three main types of jutsus,” Orochimaru said, “Taijutsu, Genjutsu, and Ninjutsu. As your sister already said, there are hundreds upon millions of just Ninjutsu. Jutsus could do anything.”
The two boys thought this over. After a minute they both nodded and Ken said, “I chose Orochimaru-sempai.” Chie rolled her eyes slightly, wondering if Ken even understood why Seiji asked his question. Ken somehow caught this. “Orochimaru-sempai is better than you!” She popped an anime blood vessel. “How do you know that?” she asked, resisting the urge to strangle him. “He’s a boy.” “That’s bull. Look at how much stronger Tsunade-chan is compared to Jiraiya-san.” “But you are better than Tsunade-san and Orochimaru-sempai is better than her, too.” “Are you trying to say I can’t beat a snake, Ken?”
“That’s enough, Chie-san,” Orochimaru said, a smile tugging at his lips. She glared at him and he gave her a look that said, “Remember-their-age.”
She growled and turned back to Ken. “Fine. I guess we’ll just have to show them, huh Seiji?” Seiji eagerly nodded. He wouldn’t lose to Ken or make a fool of himself in front of Orochimaru. Chie smirked and asked, “Ready?” The three boys nodded. She threw a scroll to Orochimaru and counted off. “Three… two… one… GO!” At the word, the four of them disappear from the yard. Chie and Seiji arrive in a small clearing in the forest. ~This looks like a good place~ She looked at her younger brother and he asked, “Is this where we are based?”
“Yes,” she replied. She did some handsigns and hold the last one. After a few seconds, her finger tips began to tingle. She pointed her hand in the air and lightning came out of it and flew up. “What are you doing?” Seiji asked, as if angered. “Just letting Orochimaru-san and Ken know we’re ready,” Chie said and added, “Don’t worry we do this all the time.” “So we wait for Orochimaru-sempai to send us a signal?” “Yep.” The two stand there for a few moments until they saw another lightning strike. It begins.
Chie handed Seiji the scroll and he said, “Chie, you are to go on ahead and approach the goal from the south and make it seem like two people are there. Also try and avoid all contact with the enemy. If you are close enough for them to smell them, no wait, when the are close like… 20 meters away, you report to me as soon as you can and give me information of their position.” She smiled to herself as she nodded. ~Seiji… you’re most likely going to be a better shinobi than your brother… already you know how to think up on this kind of strategy. I can’t wait to see how this works out.~ “What about you?” “I will be approaching the goal east,” he said, “How far can you smell?” She shrugged and said, “A good 50 meters I’d say.” “OK. So if you smell the enemy approaching in my area, come and alert me.” Seiji said, “and we’ll see how that goes.” She nodded and the two sped off on their ways.
She stayed about 45 meters away from Seiji, so she could go on with the orders. She knew exactly where she was, so it shouldn’t take that long to get home. She ran for what seemed like forever. Of course she was running at a human speed since she didn’t want to get ahead of Seiji. Chie was about 1 mile away from the goal point when she smelt Orochimaru’s scent coming near. ~Ken must have told him to do whatever he wants, making Orochimaru-san the one who was really in charge. Some sort of a plan, I guess ~ Since she wasn’t in hearing distance of Orochimaru, Chie quickly made a clone and had it continue to the goal while she went to tell Seiji.
She sped right next to Seiji and whispered, “Orochimaru-san was approaching my area from the southwest. He was 23 meters away when I left.” Seiji jumped and almost yelped before reminding himself what was going on. “Anything else?” he asked. Chie nodded and said, “I made a clone as a decoy.” Her little brother thought for a minute before asking, “Can you find Ken?” Chie smelt the air and shook her head. Seiji nodded and said, “Go back to where you were and continue what you were doing and at any cost keep Orochimaru-sempai and nii-san away from me.” Chie nodded and basically disappeared and returned to her post.
Chie couldn’t see your clone when she returned. ~No way… It should have been right here, unless…~ She smelt the air and he was close… Too close. She quickly ducked as she heard the air behind her ripping. She whipped out a kunai and span, aiming to hit the side of the stomach. Luckily for Orochimaru, he stopped her attack, barely. Both of them smirk at each other and made their next attacks.
The two push with their kunais and knock each other off balance. Being part cat, Chie regained it quicker. She kicked at the side of Orochimaru’s face. Seeing this, Orochimaru shot his tongue out and grabbed her by the throat; that only reduced the kick by a fraction. She stabbed his tongue with her kunai, but he wouldn’t let go. The smell of blood began to fill her nose. She tried to think of another plan, but Orochimaru flung her into a tree. Chie cried out in pain as her back made contact with the hard bark. “Damn,” she hissed. Almost as soon as she was finished, Orochimaru had her standing against the tree with his kunai to her throat. Orochimaru gave a smirk and hissed, “You’ll have to do better than that if you want to beat me. Chie started doing handsigns and gave him a smirk of her own. “I’m not finished yet.” Holding the last sign down, she did the lightning jutsu, aiming at his tongue. Reacting quick enough, Orochimaru zipped his tongue back in his mouth and the lightning flew straight up. While he was still recovering, Chie punched him, with full force, in the face. Then without looking at him, she ran full speed to another area.
Chie stopped and smelt for Seiji and/or Ken. She could barely smell anything from the amount of Orochimaru’s blood that was on her. ~Damn, he must have plan that.~ She tried to smell over the blood and, very faintly, found Seiji’s scent.
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Feb 7, 2008 20:31:26 GMT -5
Post by xravenx on Feb 7, 2008 20:31:26 GMT -5
ah interesting...who will win?! haha
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Feb 15, 2008 23:24:44 GMT -5
Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Feb 15, 2008 23:24:44 GMT -5
Sorry but I was grounded but here's the next part!
Seeing Seiji ahead, she ran, still at full speed, grab him and put him on her back. “Onee-chan!” Seiji yelped out, “What are you doing?!” “Orochimaru-san found me and now he’s most likely trying to find us,” Chie said, “and so it would be a good idea if we ran faster and reached the goal.” She paused and smelt the air. “OK we’re not that far now and neither is Ken, so- AHH!” She gasp out in pain as something stuck itself in the back of her leg. It wasn’t on a vital spot but still close enough to make you fall. And that’s what she did, fall and Seiji flew off of her. Chie looked up from the ground and saw Seiji landing alright and then turned back to find Orochimaru.
“Seiji, go!” she shouted. He was going to say something, but she added, “The mission always comes first! I’ll hold him off!” She heard her brother run off and as he did, Orochimaru shot his tongue at him. Quickly, Chie leaped up and grabbed the tongue. ~Well, good thing is I stopped it from getting Seiji, but now…~
Apparently Orochimaru planed this out. In about a second after she got a hold of the tongue, Chie was constricted in it. Constricted meaning that the tongue was all around her and she was basically in Orochimaru’s face. She growled as he gave you a smirk. “I told you that you’d need to do better to beat me,” Orochimaru hissed. She could feel his warm breath on her face as he spoke. “Don’t make assumptions too early, Orochi-san,” she said. She then head-bunted him, but before she made contact, he grabbed her small cat ears. Chie cried out, high-pitched. Tears were at the corners of her eyes as she closed them, awaiting his next attack. But he didn’t. Instead, Orochimaru started to rub behind them. She slowly open her green eyes and stare back in his golden ones. She got lost in them and didn't noticed that she was purring and he let go.
~*Orochimaru POV*~ He grabbed her cat ears as she tried to attack. Of course he knew they were sensitive, so when she cried out it wasn’t a surprise. He saw the tears gather up at the corner of her pale green eyes, so he started to rub behind her ears. He didn’t know why, he just did. What Chie did next took him by surprise. She started to purr. ~I guess she’s more cat than I thought.~
Her eyes were locked in his. Apparently she didn’t notice the purring coming from her. Orochimaru unwrapped his tongue from her and rub behind her ears more. She purred louder and closed her eyes. So she was enjoying this, was she? He looks at her face, calmed and kind, not the look that she had on it all day. He didn’t notice it at first, but now with her face relaxed, he could clearly see.
A small smile formed on Chie’s face. Then her lips started to mouth words. “I want to lay like this forever, until the sky falls down on me,” she whispered the last line. It wasn’t just a whisper, she sang it. ~’Lay like this forever,’ huh? In other words she’s enjoying herself and doesn’t want to moment to end. The question is why? And her voice… so much meaning.~ His next action confused him. He slid his right hand from Chie’s ear to her face. She leaned in it, like a cat does when it rubs its head against your hand. Her pale green orbs opened and looked into his golden ones. A blush came across her face as she looked slightly down, enough to break eye contact. ~The pieces are coming together. Now the only question left is, what am I doing?~
~*Chie POV*~ She blushed as she looked back into Orochimaru’s eyes. ~Why did I sing that? More importantly, why did I just do that?!~ She looked slightly down to get his stare off her. The two stand like that for a few more seconds before hearing a shout. It came in the direction of the goal point. Chie looked at Orochimaru and he nodded, pulling his hands away from you. Then the two run off.
Not even halfway there from where they were, Chie fell to one knee. ~Damn, I forgot about my womb.~ Orochimaru stopped and bend down with his back towards her. “Get on.” Before she could argue he added, “We’ll get there faster and it’ll reduce your chance of seriously injuring it.” She sighed in defeat and climb onto his back. Once she was properly on, Orochimaru continued the run.
When the two arrive in the yard, they see Seiji with a huge grin on and Ken smiling as well. “Onee-chan!” Seiji called as he saw his sister, “I won!” “That’s great,” Chie said with a smile on, “just like you planed.” “Chie why is Orochimaru-sempai carrying you?” Ken asked, looking at her with a smug look. “Orochimaru-sempai hit Chie with a kunai in the leg,” Seiji said simply. Ken ran over to her and saw the blood on her shirt. “What happened?!” he asked. “I stabbed Orochimaru-san’s tongue and when he was strangling me with it,” Chie said with a small giggle. She then chuckled to herself when Ken just stared at her as if she was crazy.
“Kisaruga, Chie,” Masaru voice said. All of them turn to see him walk towards them. “What were you guys doing?” “Training Ken and Seiji,” Chie said. “What exactly?” Masaru asked coming closer. “A mission,” she says, “And don’t worry Masaru, they didn’t get hurt.” “I can see that Chie,” he said, anger on his face, “but what if they did?” “I would have took them to the hospital, a.s.a.p.”
Masaru sighed and shook his head, knowing he couldn’t get his point to her. “Look, Masaru,” she said, “the only serious injury was my leg and Orochimaru-san would never go all out on them. Also they couldn’t hurt each other, they’re basically best friends.” Both the brothers glared at her when she said this. “Oh you know it’s true.”
Then Jun came to Masaru’s side. “Chie, what happened?” Chie sighed, irritated that she had to explain, again, what happened. She and Orochimaru make eye contact for a fraction of a second and he explained, “Chie-san and I were training Ken and Seiji in a mission situation and since we were on different sides, she and I fought.”
Jun knelt down to look at Chie's leg and then pulled the kunai that was still in it. Chie yelped out in pain and glare at her. She smiled and said, “It’s easier to heal when the kunai isn’t still in. Orochimaru, could you take Chie to her room? I’ll be there soon.” Orochimaru nodded and walked her inside.
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Feb 15, 2008 23:34:57 GMT -5
Post by xravenx on Feb 15, 2008 23:34:57 GMT -5
omg! haha that was good...wonder what will happen next!
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Feb 17, 2008 22:05:55 GMT -5
Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Feb 17, 2008 22:05:55 GMT -5
ENJOY!!! Also credit goes to Cascada for the song. Yeah I have NO songwriting talent what-so-ever.
As the two enter the house Chie said, “They worry too much.” “That’s what parents are for,” Orochimaru said with slight amusement in his voice. She laughed, but quickly silence herself. She glared at Riku, who had just appeared in front of the stairs. Riku raised an eyebrow at her and she gave him a small hiss as if saying “None of your business.” He gave a threatening growl and the two glared at each other. Orochimaru gave an irritated sigh and walked past Riku, walked up the stairs, and took Chie to her room. “Must you two be at it every time you see each other?” he asked as he sat Chie on her bed. She gave a “pfft” and crossed her arms, saying, “It’s not my fault.” Orochimaru smirked and whispered to himself, “Something so pure, yet so much hate.” “Me? Pure?” Chie asked, giving a laugh, “Have you forgotten how many times I’ve swore and was that close to killing Jiraiya?” “Forget what I said,” Orochimaru snickered. Chie gave him a look and he waved it off. Angered, she stuck her tongue, childishly, at him. As if that was going to do anything. Orochimaru glared at her and she smiled, feeling victory. Nothing gets past her ears.
“How bad is it?” Chie asked out loud, laying on her stomach and looking at her injured leg. She pulled the leg of her pants up and saw a bleeding hole in her leg. “Eh, not that bad,” she said, putting the pant leg back over. Orochimaru leaned against the wall with his arms crossed while she took a book from the bedside table. As she read, Chie heard footsteps outside the door as Orochimaru asked, “Why did you sing?” She put her book down and thought for a moment. “I’ve been wondering that myself,” she mutter. “No idea whatsoever as to why,” Chie said for an answer. “You just felt like it?” he asked, raising an eyebrow. “No. Well, kind of,” she said, not really wanting to talk about it, “I can’t really describe it. It was what I was feeling and it just sorta came out.” Blush came visible on her face. She should just be telling him “I love you,” after all, that’s where the feeling for the singing came from.
“It’s your Kekkei Genkai,” Jun’s voice said, making Chie and Orochimaru turn to her. “Kekkei Genkai?” both of them ask. Jun nodded, “The Kisarugas are the ninja sirens.” “You mean like the ones that lure sailors to their deaths in the stories?” Chie asked. “In a sense, yes,” Jun said, kneeling so she could clean her daughter’s womb. “Only that we can focus on someone’s emotions and sing them. The reason for singing is the choice of the user. They could use it to trap an enemy or use it for pleasure.” Chie’s face heated up greatly and she looked at the floor. ~Great, now he knows. Please don’t let him hate me.~ “So you have it too, Mom?” she asked. She nodded and said, “It’s how I met both Riku and Masaru. I’m sure you have more questions, but ask me later. You have a mission, don’t you?” Chie smelt the air and Riku was downstairs, good. “No, it was something to trick Riku,” she whispered in her mother’s ear, “Tsunade-chan is having a get-together for the four of us. And it’s over night.” She nodded and said, “Well you won’t be moving for an hour or two, so there’s no hurry for you.” Chie whimpered and Jun laughed while Orochimaru chuckled to himself. She HATED having to stay still and do nothing. “It won’t be that bad. Orochimaru is welcomed to stay as long as he wants.” And with that note, she left.
Chie stared at Orochimaru with huge chibi eyes. He sighed and sat down in the chair at the desk. “I’ll stay.” She smiled softly to herself before she realized that she didn’t know when she would be alone with him. “Do you I’m weak or foolish now?” she asked, quietly. Orochimaru looked at her with an eyebrow raised before shaking his head. Chie let out a sigh of relief. “I want to hear you sing the rest of it,” he said. She reddened up once again and looked at the floor. “Why?” she asked. Orochimaru shrugged. “You know how curiosity gets me sometimes.” Chie chuckled and nodded. She sat herself up and looked at him before closing her eyes, focusing on herself. She didn’t even think when the words poured out of her mouth.
“I’ll be your dream. I’ll be your wish. I’ll be your fantasy. I’ll be your hope. I’ll be your love. Be everything that you need. I love you more with every breath, truly madly deeply do. I will be strong. I will be faithful. ‘Cause I’m counting on a new beginning. A reason for living. A deeper meaning, yeah.
I want to stand with you on a mountain. I want to bathe with you in the sea. I want to lay like this forever, before the sky falls down on me.
And when the stars are shining brightly in the velvet sky. I’ll make a wish, send it to heaven, That’ll make you want to cry. The tears of joy for all the pleasure and uncertainty. That we’re surrounded by the comfort and protection of the highest power. In lonely hours. The tears devour you.
I want to stand with you on a mountain. I want to bathe with you in the sea. I want to lay like this forever, before the sky falls down on me.
Oh can’t you see it baby. Don’t have to close your eyes, ‘cause it’s standing right before you. All that you need will surely come.
I’ll be your dream. I’ll be your wish. I’ll be your fantasy. I’ll be your hope. I’ll be your love. Be everything that you need. I love you more with every breath, truly madly deeply do.
I want to stand with you on a mountain. I want to bathe with you in the sea. I want to lay like this forever, before the sky falls down on me. I want to stand with you on a mountain. I want to bathe with you in the sea. I want to lay like this forever, before the sky falls down on me.
I want to stand with you on a mountain.”
The notes were just… too perfect to be coming from her mouth. This was herself. Chie could even hear music inside her that went along with the words and tempo. She wondered if there was a way to let the music out with the words. Before she even finish the song, she felt like killing herself because her face was basically a tomato… or an apple. Either or, you get my point.
Once she finished, Chie fiddled with her fingers as you feel Orochimaru’s golden gaze on you. She kept her head down low as she watch your fingers. She heard the faint voices of her family downstairs. Ken and Seiji were talking to Masaru about their training while her mother was talking with Riku. One sentence spoken from Riku made her freeze over.
“She must leave.”
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Feb 17, 2008 23:48:49 GMT -5
Post by xravenx on Feb 17, 2008 23:48:49 GMT -5
what?! update now! lol
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Feb 17, 2008 23:52:00 GMT -5
Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Feb 17, 2008 23:52:00 GMT -5
why should I? I love seeing you being totured! lol
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Feb 17, 2008 23:54:34 GMT -5
Post by xravenx on Feb 17, 2008 23:54:34 GMT -5
grr....so cruel in your ways....just like....another person on here! haha torture expert now?
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Feb 18, 2008 19:20:14 GMT -5
Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Feb 18, 2008 19:20:14 GMT -5
maybe....
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Feb 18, 2008 20:50:11 GMT -5
Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Feb 18, 2008 20:50:11 GMT -5
Yes I'm nice. Enjoy! (PS Congrates to Dixie Chicks for the song line) Rage filled her whole body. She clenched her fists and glared at the wall. Orochimaru look at her. “Chie-san?” “That bastard,” Chie hissed under herr breath. She leaped from her bed and rushed downstairs. Sliding on the wooden floor, she made a turn and went to Riku’s room. Running with full force, Chie punched Riku right in the face. “I’m not going anywhere!” she screamed at him as he stood up. Footsteps from the Renskis and Orochimaru rushed to the room and stopped at the door. “If you think I’m leaving my family and home, then you’re one fucking stupid cat!” She glared at him with so much anger. “Chie,” her mother’s voice whispered, “please listen.” “This is a reason why, Jun,” Riku said, glaring back at Chie, “She doesn’t handle her emotions well.” “Handle emotions?” Chie asked in disbelief. “I’m surprised that you even know what emotion is, you heartless bastard!” “Emotion is a useless thing that only gives away one’s weakness,” Riku said, simply. Too simply. “Oh and you except me to act like nothings wrong?” she screamed, angry tears gathering in the corner of her eyes. “It’s called being human!” “Which you are not.” “More than you are, at least!” The two of glared at each other in the silence. Chie was growling as hate built inside her. Just looking at him made her want to rip his head off. Small footsteps retreated away from the room. “This is pathetic,” Riku muttered under his breath. “What is? Wasting your time with mere mortals and a good-for-nothing hanyou?” Chie snarled. “If you hate it so much, just leave. No one says you ever had to come.” What Riku did next took her by surprise; he chuckled. “Such talk for someone so weak.” “Riku!” Jun called out. Chie snarled, baring her teeth. Riku just merely smirked at her, which made her angrier. She clenched her fists so hard that they started to bleed. Footsteps approached her and a hand touched her shoulder. “Don’t we have a mission that you should be resting for?” Orochimaru’s voice hissed in her ear. Chie death glared him straight in his eyes as he returned it. After a minute or two she gave an irritated sigh, giving in to him. “Fine,” she spat. Shaking off his hand, Chie stomped past Orochimaru as well as Masaru, who was standing at the door. She made her way back to her room and slamed the door shut. She sat on her bed and buried her face in her hands. ~Why does he have to be such a bitch? Wanting me to leave? He’s fucking crazy!~ As the door opens, she removed her hands from her face and asked, “What now, Orochimaru-san?” before she saw him. Orochimaru sat himself next to Chie on the bed. He looks right in her eyes as he spoke. “Both you and your father are right. Emotions are what makes us human, but they do give away weakness.” Chie tried to move away from his gaze, but Orochimaru cups her chin, roughly, forcing her to look at him. She glared at him as he continued. “There are times when you have to show emotions and times when you shouldn’t. Riku believes that you shouldn’t show any emotion because that’s how he and other demons live, but they are not the only ones that believe that. Remember that one of rules of being a Shinobi is to not to show any emotion in battle.” Chie noded slightly, somewhat embarrassed that she forgot. He was right. If you let your emotions get to you in a battle, you’ll rush in without thinking properly and most likely get killed; emotions cloud your sight. Closing her eyes, Chie sighed. She felt Orochimaru’s thumb graze against her cheek. A warm tear follow his thumb. ~When did I start crying?~ She opened her eyes and stare right into golden snake ones. There was something in them that she never seen in Orochimaru’s eyes, sympathy. “Sorry,” she whispered, wiping her other eye. Her face, already warm from anger, somewhat heated up. A very small smile was on her lips. “Thank you, Orochimaru-san.” There had to be a way to show him how thankful she was. He didn’t have to be here comforting her, or even be her friend, but he was. She started humming the music that was coming up inside her. She smile nervously as Orochimaru looked at her. “Another song?” he asked. Chie nodded and said, “I’m not liking this Kekkei Genkai so much.” He chuckled and said, “No need to keep it quiet.” She stared him with a questioning look before he added, “We’re friends aren’t we?” Chie smiled and nodded. “Forgive me that it’s only a line.” Orochimaru gave a small smile, telling her he didn’t care. This was a real smile, not his normal smirk. ~He needs to smile more often.~ “Hey boy, take me away. Fly this girl as high as you can into the wind. Set me free, Oh I pray. Closer to heaven above and closer to you. Closer to you.” ~* Orochimaru POV*~ Once again he was enchanted by Chie’s voice. Only a fool couldn’t see that she put her whole being into what she sang. ~Must she put so much in her voice, making it hurt to hear it? I’m falling for the Kekkei Genkai’s effect… at least… I think I am. What other explanation is there for this feeling?~ The two stare in one another’s eyes when Chie’s voice trails off. Her pale green orbs were filled with gratitude and love. Not does she only love him, she’ thankful. But thankful for what? ~For not criticizing her feelings?~ “Orochimaru-san,” Chie said, her soft voice breaking the silence and his thoughts. Orochimaru nodded to indicate that he was listening. “I know I already said this, but thank you. I mean, thank you for being my friend and everything. I don’t know how to repay you.” With his hand still on her face, he slid it down to cup her chin. “You don’t need to.” he said, his voice the same volume as hers. Her eyes never moved from his. Their pale green color matched her tan hair perfectly, reflecting off one another. They were also just like a human’s, not slit like her father’s. “Did you know that your eyes make one tell the truth,” Chie asked. The question threw him off guard. “They’re just like a snake’s. They tell the prey that nothing bad is going to happen or a pawn that they’ll get a reward to do your bidding.” “But aren’t I snake?” Orochimaru chuckled, remembering all of his snake-like abilities. “Not like I am a cat,” she smiled. He smiled slightly back and move closer to her face. Chie’s eyes at once became frighten, while her face stayed the same. “I thought you said that you wanted to be closer to me,” he hissed playfully. “Well, uhh,” she stumbled, a blush once again crawling on her face, “that was in a…” He cut her off by placing his lips against hers. Sure it wasn’t the smartest thing to do, but it did shut her up. (Oh and please send feedback to tell me if Orochi was out of character or not.)
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