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Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Oct 12, 2007 18:53:34 GMT -5
Nakita: wOOt go me!!!! me: shut it! Good job buddy! Can't wait for the next ^^
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Post by xravenx on Oct 12, 2007 19:43:11 GMT -5
Nakita is awesome! cant wait for the next one either!
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Post by Chronos on Oct 13, 2007 13:54:59 GMT -5
Itasuske and Nakita reached the Inn, and both almost fainted. “hmm, interesting. It seems we share the load when we speed sound together.” Itasuske noticed. Noah and Kaori were waiting there for them. “Where’s Twilight?” Nakita asked. “He is still off looking for you. Why, is something going to happen?” Kaori asked. Itasuske answered almost immediately. “We are going to have serious problems. I believe that we will have visitors soon.” The sense of dread was almost palpable. “Who is coming?” Noah asked. “Soulcatcher, Howler, Sauske, and Orochimaru.” Nakita finished for Itasuske. “Ok,” Noah said “I have developed a Genjutsu for just this sort of occasion. What you do is…….”
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Soulcatcher thought this was her greatest work yet. As they neared the inn, She started singing, plunging the Inn and themselves in her own twisted nightmare world. The inn itself stayed the same, but the world outside changed dramatically. The inn was now in a barren wasteland, instead of the lush field that it was in before. “This place always gave me the creeps.” Howler said. Orochimaru also looked severely wierded out as well. Sauske looked around and saw a very strange creature. It looked like a giant crab, but it had a giant skull for a shell. Upon closer inspection, a person lived in that skull. Her face was bloated and her eyes looked like they would pop out of her face. Sauske had never seen anything like this. No one had, except Soulcatcher herself. This was her world after all. The many bizarre creatures that roamed here were her own creations. Unless Itasuske and his ilk could defeat them, they would all be stuck in this world. And if they wanted go get back out, they would have to let her go. Her security was set. They reached the door of the inn, and Howler was a bit apprehensive. “Remember, we are not dealing with normal Ninja here.” “Quiet, you fool.” Orochimaru hissed. “I agree with Orochimaru here.” Sauske said. “We must be silent to have a chance.” They went inside, and found no one in the foyer, so they all went to the dining room. No luck there either. “I know were they are.” They all whispered simultaneously. They all went to the Dojo, and spotted all of them in the same stance, all of them doing the same hand sign. All of them were in a line. They all squared off. “Good, Sealing Jutsu!” Itasuske said as Sauske squared off against him. The others had sealed up their opponents in. “I will take you out this time.” Kaori as she sealed Howler in. “Father, this is for tricking me and hunting us down.” Nakita said, sealing Orochimaru. Noah and Soulcatcher simply squared off, neither one of them had much to say that already hadn’t been said.
Disclaimer: All of these battles are don at the same time. I’m just splitting them to cause less confusion.
Kaori struck first, creating a bolt of pure light and throwing it at the Howler. It made a glancing blow on his shoulder, burning a patch of his rotting skin, creating a foul smell. He responded by loosing a deafening howl and lunging at Kaori. She quickly dodged and threw a handful of ice Senbon into his back. He simply shrugged and mocked her. “Ow? Was that supposed to hurt? You are getting soft, Kaori.” He made another lunge at Kaori. She dodged again, and threw more Senbon into his back. “Why don’t you use your Rasangan? It helped you so much last time.” The Howler said mockingly. He then started making a hand sign, but he discovered a solid sheet of unbreakable ice covering his back, and it was spreading. “What the……. What is this?” he exclaimed. “A little something I cooked up. I call it Ice Entrapment.” The ice now covered his shoulders, making it hard to move his arms. “No, I will not be turned into a Howl-sickle!” He then made one hand sign, and flames erupted all around him. The ice melted, prompting Kaori to change tactics. Once the fires died down, Kaori came up behind him and tried kicking him in the back of the head. He quickly caught her and threw her to the ground. She rolled on the ground, making the impact less by spreading it across her whole body. It was still a hard hit to take, and she looked like it was a bit to hard. She was in a ball, but was not moving.
“Face it, little girl. You couldn’t kill me then, you can’t kill me now!” He said as he stomped up to Kaori’s prone body. Kaori then sprang from her ball, having one hand glow ice blue and one moonlight silver. “Moonlight Banishing! Ice Rasangan!” The Howler was not expecting this. What in the world was Moonlight Banishing? He got hit by both of those, flew way off into the distance, stuck in a shell of Ice. When Kaori walked up to his frozen form, she sighed. “True, I cannot kill you, but I can make it so no one will find you.” She opened a hole of darkness, and shoved Howler into it. “Goodbye, and good riddance.”
“You do know what you are getting into, right?” Sauske said to Itasuske. “I’m about to face a traitor to the leaf. The second one from the same clan.” Itasuske dug in a wound that would probably never heal. Sauske activated his Sharingan. “Never compare me to him.” Itasuske got his gentle fist stance ready. “Why not? It is true.” “I am NOT anything like my brother!” Sauske said, rushing at Itasuske, sword drawn. “Oh, right, you stuck with Orochimaru, your brother didn’t.” Itasuske said, dodging the swipes Sauske made, though it was getting harder to do. He did a back flip and switched to Dragoon style. Sauske saw that his style had changed, and that he could not get through it. “What about you? You are pretty much in love with your sister.” he said coolly. “Nakita is NOT my sister. She is the true offspring of Orochimaru, while I am just a experiment.” Itasuske said this, and he felt even more resolute. Sauske said “Enough of this!” and rushed at Itasuske again. A quick dodge, and Itasuske had him. He quickly changed styles again, and blocked off most of Sauske’s chakra points before he knew what was going on.
“Not a bad move.” Sauske said, slumping over from not having much chakra to go off of. This was actually the closest battle Itasuske had been in. When he pulled back, Itasuske had a big slash across his cheek. “You as well, Sauske Uchiha. But I was the better of the two of us today.” His eyes were neither Hyuga or Uchiha, but a straight gold, even brighter than Nakita’s golden eyes. He then deactivated both eyes and waited for the others to finish their battles.
Next time: Nakita v Orochi and the climactic Noah v Soulcatcher!
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Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Oct 13, 2007 14:17:24 GMT -5
wOOt!!!! I'm hyper now.... good thing too cause I'm going to a party in less then a hour! Good fighting!
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Post by xravenx on Oct 14, 2007 0:44:55 GMT -5
cant wait for next one! father vs. daughter! and to add to it Noah vs. evil Soulcatcher!
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Post by Chronos on Oct 14, 2007 23:05:53 GMT -5
Orochimaru sighed. “Come, Nakita, do we have to do this?” Nakita got her bow out. “If the result is that you will leave me alone with Itasuske, then yes.” She drew a arrow and pointed it at her father’s head. “Don’t make me do this.” she said. Orochi sniggered. “You couldn’t even if I had that fool Itasuske in my hands, ending his pitiful existence.” She loosed an arrow, which he dodged, but still caught him by surprise. “I will if I have to.” she said. “Fine, you insolent woman,” he pulled out his sword, “we will do it your way,” he lunged at her. She, being his daughter, easily saw the move and dodged out of the way. “Got you,” he said. A pit of snakes opened up where she was about to land. Nakita thought quickly, and pulled out a paper bomb, threw it at the snakes, and had it explode just before she hit the ground. When the smoke cleared, she was a bit singed, but not too bad off. She leapt in the air and threw a vial of a poisonous gas that she had built up a immunity to. The smoke was thick enough to cover the entire area where the two were fighting, but that was where it stopped. Random coughs broke the silence, thus signifying to Nakita that her father had taken some in. Then Orochimaru’s sword came blazing out of the fog, aiming at Nakita’s gut. But she had a better plan for it. She quickly caught the sword, strung it in her bow, and shot it in the direction it had come.
A sharp “Gah!” pierced the silence when she shot the sword. Then a sharp wind blew all the smoke away, revealing Orochimaru with his own sword in his leg. “Why do you resist?” Orochimaru asked. “because I fight for a person I love more than life itself!” Nakita exclaimed. She split her bow into two short swords and started swinging them in calculated strikes. Orochimaru, devoid of a weapon, limped and was barely able to dodge most of the blows she was throwing, but not all of them. She made a few cuts along his torso and legs, never reaching for his face or arms. She had some respect for him, so she didn’t want to do too much against him. “I will remind you again,” She said while slowly whittling away at Orochi, “I have killed a Taken, and you have not even taken out a Atasuki. The difference in our abilities is plain and clear.” Orochimaru got up, did a little flare if his hands, and bowed to Nakita. “It seems that I taught you well. I willingly concede to defeat.” He did a small bow. “Father,” Nakita said, bowing as well. They both embraced, and Orochi disappeared.
Noah was having a bit of trouble. He did not fully expect Soulcatcher to go all out. But it was her world, and it seemed as though she could bend it to her will. Rocks and walls seemed to split at her slightest touch, when she wanted them to. He couldn’t get even two hits in, he was dodging so many things. Sure, his rotation worked for a bit, but he could not rotation everything. He spent most of his time dodging things, but a idea popped into his head. He got in plain sight, and saw a huge boulder thrown at him. He jumped, caught it, did a small rotation, and sent it back with twice it’s original velocity. Catcher simply made the boulder burst by a touch of her finger. She cackled, “You can’t even touch me, foolish Hyuga, and there is no Shifter to come save you!” She then stopped throwing boulders, and went after Noah. This was the chance he was waiting for. Revenge for almost taking Alexz’s soul, payback for what she did while he was a shadow master, and most of all, for plummeting his beloved Inn and Dojo into this nightmare realm. When she got close, he pulled her out of the air, and slammed her into the ground. She, in turn, grabbed him, and spun him around and threw him against the wall. His ring, which he thought was long dead, started making the same feeling in his hand. “No, I must not fall back into darkness.” Noah pulled off the ring and threw it at Soulcatcher.
She caught it, and a new effect started taking place inside the world. Catcher wasn’t counting on having other Taken against her, but here was Shifter’s ring, almost burning a hole in her hand. She let go of it, but the last dying act of Shifter had already taken place. The world returned to normal, no longer in Catcher’s nightmare realm. She could almost hear Shifter’s mocking laugh as the ring melted an made a hole in the floor. While she was distracted, Noah got his chain sickle and hooked Catcher by the arm and reeled her in. He quickly made a few strikes to loosen her up, then went into a straight 128 palm strike, causing Catcher to fall to the ground, her Chakra almost completely depleted. She got up slowly, and turned to face all of them at once. She still stood, defiantly resolute in her purpose, and they were beat as well. None of them had any energy left to fight, but Catcher had one final plan. She started gathering in all of her chakra, creating a small vortex of darkness. She then pointed it at Itasuske. “You will not fulfill your destiny!” She exclaimed. The vortex shot out a concentrated beam of darkness. Noah was a bit far to do a rotation and still leave Itasuske ok. Kaori didn’t have enough chakra to create a light shield for him. Nakita was held down by her father. The beam almost hit Itasuske, who couldn’t concentrate because of the gash in his cheek. Then Twilight came in and did a very quick rotation. “What did I miss?” He said as the bolt hit the roof of the Dojo, making it cave in. All of them got out, and Soulcatcher was about to escape, but Itasuske stood in her way. Nakita, free of her father, stood right next to him. Catcher still stood, but she was scared. The woman who killed her sister and the man behind the extermination of the Taken stood before her. “So, what are you going to do to me?” Catcher said. “We are going to have you meet your sister.” Nakita said. She drew a arrow, and Itasuske got his kunai out. She shot the arrow into her head, and he drove the point home by burying his kunai into her heart. “It is almost done, but before anything else happens, Nakita, will you marry me?” Itasuske asked, going on one knee and holding her hand. “I don’t have anything to give you but my eternal love, protection, and..” he paused, “this.” He presented a small ring made of his most precious item, his towel. Her eyes filled with tears, and she took his hand in hers. “I will.”
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Post by xravenx on Oct 14, 2007 23:28:21 GMT -5
awesome!!! yes die evil soulcatcher!! then end of this part kinda reminded me of POTC ....
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Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Oct 15, 2007 19:47:08 GMT -5
*bowing* you are the all holy writer!!!!!!! and yes that is Nakita! Evil but yet she does love her father. Weird I know but that's how she is.
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Post by Chronos on Oct 15, 2007 21:18:36 GMT -5
Itasuske was feeling nervous. He could stare down the face of the most ugly of all horrors, but he was nervous about a simple wedding. He was mentally kicking himself in the head. Why was he so nervous? Was it that he was not sure of the out come? That could not be it, because he knew that she loved him as much as he loved her. She had faced down her father for his sake. So, as he put on a suit specially tailored to his height and shoulder length, he set himself up for success. Not only did he make himself as handsome as possible, but he also made it so that he would match his soon to be wife. His suit was a simple white shirt with black pants and his robe, unfastened so that they could see the shirt and pants. He processed down with Twilight as his best man, Kakashi in the background, looking kinda foolish in a suit. The wedding was held on a field on top of a hill, overlooking all of Konoha. They were to have a quiet service, so they would not be interrupted. On his side, there was almost no one, since Noah was presiding the service. But not to be outdone by his rival, Guy was on his side, looking a little bit better in a suit than Kakashi. Tsunade was there, being relived from Naruto her duties. She was sitting on Nakita’s side. How she had heard of this, Itasuske did not know. While Itasuske was admiring Noah’s handiwork and the beautiful view, Nakita came. If he looked good, she was stunning. Her long black hair let down, flowing in the warm breeze that caressed the hill. She also had a beautiful white dress which accentuated her golden eyes and her unique figure. Then she came with her bridesmaids. Kaori was right behind her, and from what he could tell, she was helping Nakita’s appearance by casting a faint golden glow around her. A friend of Nakita’s that he didn’t recognize was behind Kaori. Itasuske got a vague sense of déjà vu, but quickly got over it.
She possessed up the small walk, and turned to him. He could tell that this would be when she was the most nervous, the same as him. They both confirmed each other’s emotions, took each other’s hand, and turned to Noah. Noah smiled at the both of them. This day was long coming for him, but that just made it all the better. “Dearly beloved…..” He began. He continued through the service, and as they went through it, a strange man came in on Itasuske’s side. He wore a white cape, had a ring like a snake on his left hand, and looked a bit out of place. Itasuske didn’t notice, his whole mind was on how he had gotten the finest woman he had ever met to marry him. It was almost too good to be true. But once they got there, Itasuske himself pulled out a ring that truly symbolized their relationship. It was a ring made of a special forged metal that was said to be unbreakable. It was smooth all around, and had a golden interior, and a clear exterior. It was perfect because it showed that outward appearances had no hold over how the person was on the inside. Inset on the ring was a small diamond, only to show that the center is always pure, through hardships and tribulations. Nakita, taken away from the beauty of the ring, almost kissed him on the spot. But she remembered herself and presented a ring to Itasuske. It was a kind of opaque on the outside, with streaks of red and black intermixing. Obviously, he thought, to show his abilities of both the Sharingan and Byakugan. But once he held it, it turned a golden color. Itasuske was also taken by this ring, and when they had both put on their rings, Noah closed the book he was reading from, and said, with a smile on his face, “You may kiss the Bride.” Itasuske turned to her, looked he in the face, and kissed her more passionately than the first time he kissed her. She, in turn, surprised him by giving the same back.
After the service was done, they all gathered together and had a small party on the same hill. All of the men congratulated Itasuske for his fine choice of a woman, and the same went for Nakita and the women. There was a little dancing and music. The party was actually very lively for only having a select amount of Ninja there. Itasuske, when they were cutting the cake, promptly smashed it in Nakita’s face, who almost did the same to him, except with the whole cake. With the tossing of flowers, Nakita’s friend, named Kemino, caught them. When Itasuske was throwing the garter, it landed on Kakashi’s head while he was reading. Everyone had a good laugh at that. After all the festivities were done, Itasuske went and stood on top of the hill. Nakita joined him, saying, “What are you thinking about?” Itasuske looked at her, smiled, and said, “Us, the future, and tonight.” She smiled a small smile to that last one, but fate had a different plan for the two lovers.
That same strange man came up to Itasuske. Nakita ran in front of the strange man, saying, “No, not yet Chronos. We still have time, right?” Chronos sighed, looked with deep sadness in his eyes, and said, “I am afraid not. I must take Itasuske now, or else this union would not even be.” Itasuske went up to the man, leaned over to Nakita, and asked, “Who is this man?” Chronos answered for Nakita, “I am what you will be. I am Chronos, master of time. You are Itasuske, and you have a great destiny about you.” Itasuske turned to Nakita, and asked, “What does he mean? Am I going somewhere?” Nakita sighed, turned her head, and said, “You are to lead a group of ninja, including myself, against people like Soulcatcher. It is to stop a war that was on the horizon, before we stopped it.” She was crying. It was not fair, she thought. She wanted at least one night. Itasuske looked pensive, “What if I don’t go?” Chronos lost his sadness look, and held up a hourglass, “Then this will happen.” The sand in the hourglass turned clear, and Itasuske saw visions of his closest friends being tortured and cut down in front of his face. Then he saw the scariest vision he would never forget. It was Noah, but he was in all black, and the ring on his hand had taken him over. After the visions stopped, Itasuske accepted his fate. “I will take the job.” Chronos offered the hourglass to Itasuske, who took hold of it. Immediately, Itasuske noticed a difference. He felt like he knew everything that had happened and that would happen. Chronos left, and Nakita was alone with him. “I guess you should go,” she said. “Yeah, I guess I should,” he agreed. He was just phasing out of time, when Nakita hit him on the head. “I told you to never kiss me in pub-” the rest was cut off because he was totally out of phase. He started traveling to the past, to the point the knew where to go.
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Post by xravenx on Oct 15, 2007 21:32:29 GMT -5
its so good!!!!!! do i really need to say more!
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Post by Twilight on Oct 15, 2007 22:05:32 GMT -5
nothing more except that it's awesome
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Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Oct 16, 2007 19:33:26 GMT -5
wOOt. At least Kemino won't be breathing down my neck anymore. XD Nice job, again.
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Post by Twilight on Oct 18, 2007 2:31:18 GMT -5
Kemino can be a pain sometimes
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Post by dragonjinchuuriki3 on Oct 18, 2007 5:40:48 GMT -5
when she wants to........
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Post by Twilight on Oct 18, 2007 15:52:59 GMT -5
I'm your best man? chronos
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